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kyabetsu at 01:34am on 08/11/2006
kyabetsu at 01:34am on 08/11/2006( Chapter 1, final 2/3 with fixes. 2,612 Words. )
So, I went back to when I started disliking what i was writing yesterday and added some stuff. It hit me in the middle of the night that there's no way the turtles would have neglected to post at least ONE look-out while surrounded by hordes of humans, all hunting for them. So that got added. I fixed up the sound effects so that they were part of text and a larger picture.
I worry that once again, I lost track of the fog. I worry that I've skimped on what should have been massively visceral reactions. I feel like the characters are flat and the adrenaline peeters out before the chapter is over.
But. All of that is for my editor to help me with. the point is that i WROTE. And HAVING something to edit is the goal! :D Huzzah! Tomorrow we start on Chapter 2!! ...i have to look at my outline and figure out what's IN chapter 2...
but first, BED! :D
and my spiffy graphy thingy:
So, I went back to when I started disliking what i was writing yesterday and added some stuff. It hit me in the middle of the night that there's no way the turtles would have neglected to post at least ONE look-out while surrounded by hordes of humans, all hunting for them. So that got added. I fixed up the sound effects so that they were part of text and a larger picture.
I worry that once again, I lost track of the fog. I worry that I've skimped on what should have been massively visceral reactions. I feel like the characters are flat and the adrenaline peeters out before the chapter is over.
But. All of that is for my editor to help me with. the point is that i WROTE. And HAVING something to edit is the goal! :D Huzzah! Tomorrow we start on Chapter 2!! ...i have to look at my outline and figure out what's IN chapter 2...
but first, BED! :D
and my spiffy graphy thingy:
accomplished
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