BUZZ BUZZ Once There Was...

( Chapter 2. Reposting of yesterday's 4 paragraphs with an additional 1/2 the chapter. 2,174 words. )



I got to talk to my editor today. Hello dee!! The poor thing has been laid up repeatedly with pain issues and now with a cold from hell. :( But she had many many many excellent suggestions that would never have come to light if I hadn't just freakin' bit the bullet and started writting. Those same suggestions pretty much make chunks of the stuff i've already done obsolete, but what the hell! We're going for VERBAGE now and EDITTING later!

Still. Fancy fun. She's so much help. When I grow up I wanna be strong and helpful like her. :D



edit: forgot the spiffy graph thing!

( Chapter 2. First Eighth? 178 words. )






Okay "the object" is vague. If anyone can guess what kind of horrible, hospital-esque THINGY poor Raph's got stuck in his head, they win a prize! (And kevin knows, so he's disqualified. sorry, babe.)

But YES! Chapter 2 will be lots of yummy YUCKY HORRIBLE laboratory details. :D huzzah! Things are quite truncated tonight, b/c Kevin and I are going to go have a good time.

I just needed to write SOMETHING, just to keep my stride. Here we go! 4th night in a row! :D

*Dances!*



my groovy graph: